Re: Org. XIV (story)

[lethalityComplex]

Felix simply dismissed his weapon and blocked Lance's strikes. He then stuck his hand out, a clear, very large weapon appeared in his hand. The Spirit Materia in his pocket glowed as he did this. He then slashed with it once, sending a huge, very wide wave of destructive energy at Lance. He dismissed the weapon.

[Eques tenebrarum]

Genova appeared in the room, against the wall. The wave skimming over his boots. "What the hell are you doing, spirit materia is only affective against Ravain!"

[lethalityComplex]

"I control data, don't you think I know that? Besides, I changed the 'settings' of the blast before I fired it."

[Eques tenebrarum]

"How so?" The earth master said, touching the hilt of his massive blade.

[lethalityComplex]

"All attacks initated by myself are run through a modulator in my brain, allowing me to change the raw information for the attack, such as element, AOE, efficiency against certain creatures, etc."

[Whats_Up4444]

Zane and Sally walked out, got back on the motorcycle, and took off.

After a few minutes of riding they made it to another place called "Mikes Beef".

"Hows this place?l

[AKeybladeYouSay]

"Yeah, this is good." Sally said, getting off the bike once more.

[Admin (HalcyonWandering)]

"All attacks initated by myself are run through a modulator in my brain, allowing me to change the raw information for the attack, such as element, AOE, efficiency against certain creatures, etc."

<He has a godmodding computer in his brain? Really, Gstol? -_->

[lethalityComplex]

<Not exactly. Only a little bit of the information can be modified, and doing so expends more energy than just using the attack. The only things 'editable', are damage, element, AOE, and effective vs. He can also only do it 4 times a battle, so... god-mod? I think not.>

[XGeass]

<Not exactly. Only a little bit of the information can be modified, and doing so expends more energy than just using the attack. The only things 'editable', are damage, element, AOE, and effective vs. He can also only do it 4 times a battle, so... god-mod? I think not.>

<Actually that sounds exactly like godmodding aside from only being able to do it 4 times.>

[Admin (HalcyonWandering)]

<Exactly my point, the "only four things" are pretty much every aspect of an attack. And four times a battle is plenty enough to destroy anyone. And I've warned you about this before... -_- >

[Whats_Up4444]

<Its not godmod. Its Overpowered. Im starting to miss Skazza>

Zane parked the.bike then hopped off. Removing the helmet he then opened the door for Sally then gave a "Not sure if u want" look.

[Eques tenebrarum]

<we should do a list of the most OP oc's ever made here....Roland is not included, he's Badass>

Dante whipped his guitar up and it disappeared from sight.

[XGeass]

<Its so overpowered its godmodding. :O>

[AKeybladeYouSay]

Sally walked in through the door, glancing back at Zane for a moment and winking at him before continuing into the restaurant.

[Admin (HalcyonWandering)]

Lance's expression darkened as he dismissed his blades, "Spirit Walkers, I'd like you to return to your home." He raised his hands and the two were enveloped in dark corridors transporting them back to the Spirit Walkers' head quarters.

Thalia appeared on edge for a moment. Then, a shadowy dragon pulled itself from where Maya had disappeared. "Nice trick," Thalia admitted.

[NebulaGregarZX]

Aleri put down his book for a second. "...Is there something to be concerned about...? Ugh, I feel like I've been slighted, somehow. Maybe it's just my imagination..." He picked the lengthy volume back up. The history of the Keyblade War... this is an incredible tale, but I can't even remember half of these names. I'll never remember any of this later. Still, I should do it justice and finish. I guess the trainees disappearing was a blessing in disguise...

I have time to train myself.

[Namine]

I walked into the castle with my keyblade in my hand. "My name is Eira Delacour. I would like to have a job and join your forces. I am a very good fighter and i excel at any form of magic. I also provide health for those in need. Never turning my back on them. I am a keyblade master and would like to join the rank of Organization 14." I bowed infront of the throne and held my keyblade across my chest.

[NebulaGregarZX]

She had somehow wandered into Xeromus's room, where he was lying in bed, still bandaged up. He glanced at her. "Cut the formalities. Hm, you wouldn't be the first wilder of the Keyblade to join us. In fact, we kind of already have thirty-two members, and almost half of them can use keyblades. I guess letting you join couldn't hurt, but... this is rather sudden."

"You should probably take a stroll around the castle first, meet some of the members. ...Oh, right, they're asleep. It's night. Well, I'll gvie you a room, and you can meet everybody else in the morning." Xeromus scratched a vague map into the wall, showing her that to get to the Members' Quarters, she must exit the room, go to the end of the hallway, turn left, and go until she finds a four-way intersection, turn right, and proceed to room XXXIII.

<I hate to bother you, but could you please try to use correct capitalization/grammer/spelling? It makes things clearer and easier to read.>

[Namine]

"Thank you for the room. You're very kind to let me stay here." I waved a good bye and walked out of the room and followed the map to my room. "Room 33, I wonder if the other members are as nice as he was? I entered my room and it was beautifully pure white. I sat on my bed and wrapped my arms around my knees and pulled them closer. I stared out the window recalling the Mark of Mastery exam. How I lost my friend to the darkness. I began to cry blaming myself for the loss of them. Knowing it wasn't my fault, but i felt like it was. I cried myself to sleep and pulled the covers over me and i fell asleep on my bed.

[NebulaGregarZX]

Aleri, thirty-one rooms away, closed his book. "I'll never remember this stuff, but at least I got through the book. I'll never remember Elie, Gonah, and Makah's story, or even the stuff about Roland. Well, I still have a little bit more to read before I can sleep."

...Why do I feel like our numbers have just increased? Augh, if I have to train somebody else, I'll never get to work on my own skills! Please, please, PLEASE let the new member already be competant...!

[Namine]

I woke up. I headed to my shower and washed my body. I then washed my hair and then turned the water off. I grabbed onto my towel and stepped out and placed the towel around my body and walked out of the bath room. I looked inside my jewelry box and grabbed ahold of 2 stud earrings and placed them on my ear. I placed my black corset-like top on my body. I placed my short-sleeved white cardigan over my shirt. I then put my frilled black skirt on. I sat on my bed and grabbed my boots and placed them on. I sat back up and walked to my door and opened it. I made my way out and headed to the foyer in the castle. "I wonder if many people are able to fight here. There are a lot of people, 32 others making me the 33 member of the order."

[NebulaGregarZX]

Aleri bolted up, having failed to notice himself falling asleep. He picked up the book he had been reading and set it aside before getting up. "...That felt short. Five days left..." He yawned as he stood up, reaching into his closet for a simple training gi.

A minute later, he stood in the hallway, all set for what he intended to do. To spare his body the rigor of running to the training hall, he opened a Light Corridor snd stepped through.

He hadn't expected to come out at the top of a set of stairs, leading to the foyer.

Aleri tumbled down, painfully colliding with the stairs at three hits per second.

"OW-ow-OW-ow-OW-ow-OW...!"

He sprawled onto the floor facefirst, mildly irritated at how his day had started off. "That... should not have happened." Something interfered with the corridor. Probably unintentionally.

Aleri pulled himself to his feet, immediately spotting an unfamilair girl. "Oh. So she's the new member." He approached her, extending a hand. "My name is Aleri, I am Number II in this Organization. What's your name, Number XXXIII?"

<Be careful about advancing the passage of time, Namine. Other characters are doing things, and I doubt they like it to suddenly be morning while they're busy fighting or eating out.>

[Admin (HalcyonWandering)]

Lance stepped out of a DC onto Castle Asylum.

He walked into the foyer and have the girl a smile, "You must be the new member. I'm Lance Willright, king of Synthisle and second in command of Org. XIV. It's been awhile since I've had time to greet a new member. So, Aleri? Initiation?" He asked hoping he'd be the one to test the new member.

[Namine]

I shook your hand. I saw you fall to the ground after falling down the stairs. "Oh, my are you okay?My name Is Eira Delacour. I was taken into the organization yesterday. Your the first person I have met so far." I began to smile and light enveloped around my keyblade.

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