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Post  AKeybladeYouSay on Tue Dec 14, 2010 10:34 pm

<Maybe something like the Org. XIII theme, in tempo and tone, sorta, I guess...>
"About what?" Sally said, starting to look a bit worried herself.

Meanwhile...

"Son, I know you don't want to have to go through a long fight."
"Wha-"
Nori used Ragnarok, knocking his son down and winning the match.
"Uhh..." Norio groaned.
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Post  Skazzasurf on Tue Dec 14, 2010 10:35 pm

<LOL. Norio must be so weak then...>
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Post  Haar_Dragon on Tue Dec 14, 2010 10:38 pm

Dispatch was still in the cave, wondering what Daniel left in such a rush for. He decided to find out. He left and searched the entire area, but no luck. He LCd back to the Castle, burst into <insert where most of the people in the castle are> and yelled, "Daniel is...oh wait you guys hate him. Well, if you're wondering, he's gone."

Aaron said, "You don't know that." He DCd to DI, where Daniel was. <no, he didn't see Daniel, they'd have to be going to his cave which nobody knows about> he searched around, and found only Joe, who he DCd back to the Castle. "He probably just DCd somewhere. I found Joe though. He was sleeping."

As a matter of fact, Joe was still sleeping.

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Post  Whats_Up4444 on Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:00 pm

"Our past. Our future" Zane said with half of his face hiding. "It all started back in Radi-" He was interupted by a power darkness behind Sally. It was a Dark Corridor. Out came two figures in black coats. "Whoa! Is that him?!" The one to the right called to him. It was a girl. She had a very innocent voice.

"I think it is!" The other said. She sounded slightly more dark.

"Are you talking to me? I think you got me confused with someone else."

The darker voice spoke. She sounded hurt. "What are you talking about?"

"Don't you remember us?!" The other sounded more hurt.

"But", she took off her hood. "It's me" She looked really sad. <She looks like a Scene Girl or a Goth>

"I'm sorry but-"

"We may look different now! But we remember the way were! Look into eyes" The other girl said as she removed her hood. "Listen to our voice! Look at the rose" She said as they both revealed two roses.

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Post  Whats_Up4444 on Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:21 pm

<Explain how Xarlone has 5 hearts to wield 5 Keyblades. And D-Links work nothing like that....You never played BbS did you? -_- And it's called Dark Splicer.>

Zane's eyes widen. He lost his breath. "Miyu". He said as he walked slowly her. Walking past Sally like didn't exist. Zane grabbed the girl he called out. "Miyu....You're heart is...".

"Lost to the darkness? I know. It was Richard. He asked for me and Yumi to release our heart. Then....these are the results. Muyix and Xiyum. Names of Nobodies. Then-".

She had her lips locked like a door unable to speak. Locked by a pair of keys known as lips. Zane's.

<Uh-oh. Sally's about to open a can of whoop-ass with a Chakram as a can opener. Probably because that of that horrible cheesy writing that made ME laugh. Hell, Twilght had better writing! I suck at explaining a kiss. -_->
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Post  AKeybladeYouSay on Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:27 pm

<Didn't even realize you meant a kiss until that OOC. XD>
"Oh, this isn't gonna fly."
Sally summoned her Chakrams, whacked one into Zane's head and proceeded in mercilessly beating this woman, slashing her with the two chakrans in rapid succession.
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Post  Whats_Up4444 on Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:36 pm

<_<Well, maybe that's why I don't write romance>_>

Zane grabbed Sally and Xiyum grabbed Muyix. "Stop it, Sally! What are you doing?!" he yelled.
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Post  AKeybladeYouSay on Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:41 pm

Sally threw her chakram just inches away from Zane's head.
"I trusted you! I never want to see you again!" Sally screamed. She summoned her chakram again and ran to her room, tears streaming from her face.


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Post  Maverick Entity on Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:44 pm

"Walking outside the castle, avoiding all attention due to distortion spells"

Oxthmas: "Flipping his special coin" Well that was a boring match.

Gunamnex: "Walking with hands behind his back" Indeed, although I do quite wonder why fate conspired to give those two the power of the keyblade over the one boy whose image is still implanted in my mind. <Sora, lol, the universe is a bit altered from my ideal, but whats up provided a way to make it all work out.>

Oxthmas: "Stops and looks over to where Sally is wrecking havoc" Seems the young couple we saw earlier is in a bit of a conflict.

Gunamnex: "Looks over, but continues walking" I suggest you don't get too close. That girl has the rage of 1000 ticked off behemoths, and I wouldn't step anywhere near that. Come, I heard of a fantastic little shop not too far away that's selling a new form of sea salt ice cream.

Oxthmas: "Adjusts his tie, starts walking again" Yeah, yeah, I'm coming.
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Post  Haar_Dragon on Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:47 pm

Dispatch said, "I told you...Well, Imma go now." He opened an LC to Twilight Town and began exploring, finding a foam bat along the way. "Huh. Wonder what this is? Kind of a crap weapon when I have a sword..." Little did he know, he'd stepped into a parallel world... <Canon KHverse>

Aaron called Dispatch a whole lot of things that really...yeah...and he himself left for RG instead. Once there, he visited Ansem's lab and entered the Space Paranoids in much the same way <Sora> had: Mashing buttons.

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Post  Skazzasurf on Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:48 pm

<Omfg remind me that Whats_Up is my fucking critic.....I wasn't even the first one to mess up the D-Links like that, it was Nebula and I just went along with it cause it's impossible for D-Links to work in different ways. It's not like this is a god-damn book or anything...As for Xarlone having five hearts, he made a machine that extracted peoples hearts and put them into him. There. YOU HAPPY!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! We're not writing a fucking book or anything as I already said. You think I'm bad?!?!?! There are others out there who dont even do story format! Just fucking sick of it.>
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Post  Haar_Dragon on Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:53 pm

<Prepare to be modded...And Nebula hasn't been around for too long.>

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Post  Whats_Up4444 on Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:56 pm

<Damn. She wasn't suppose to leave. Oh well.>

"What's her problem?" Muyix asked.

"I don't know....I'll check". Zane said as he went to Sally's room.

XxxX

"Sally....What happened? You went berserk for no reason". He asked behind the door.
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Post  AKeybladeYouSay on Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:59 pm

"No reason?" Sally sobbed from behind the door. "You think that was for no reason? Do you remember the paopu?" And with that, Sally fell silent.
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Post  Skazzasurf on Wed Dec 15, 2010 12:00 am

<Haar, it was a while ago. Like somewhere around pg. 30.>
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Post  Whats_Up4444 on Wed Dec 15, 2010 12:04 am

<Skazza calm down. I just wanted to know how he had 5 Keyblades. Maverick is the only one to use script format and he is the best writer here. On the GFAQs topic I created everyone agreed that his character was the best and he was the best writer. >
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Post  AKeybladeYouSay on Wed Dec 15, 2010 12:05 am

<Sally's still waiting for an answer.>
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Post  Skazzasurf on Wed Dec 15, 2010 12:16 am

<No I'm not meaning script but just things you cant even understand like... "Nathan was like blah blah blah and he ran over to the hole and died and lalalalala"
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Post  AKeybladeYouSay on Wed Dec 15, 2010 12:18 am

<Mr. Up, please check your PM.>
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Post  Haar_Dragon on Wed Dec 15, 2010 12:33 am

<*ahem* Gluuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrg! Sorry, really wanted to do that, and as I have no idea what's going on until the plot commences, I'll just do my own thing till then.>

In his LC to Destiny I, Dispatch saw a shadow, and it looked astonishingly like Daniel. "Huh. Didn't think I'd see him there" Because Daniel had been wandering around the DC realm looking for a way out. "Nah, couldn't be." He continued on his way and looked far around, but still, nothing. "he couldn't be on another of the islands, could he?"

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Post  Admin (HalcyonWandering) on Wed Dec 15, 2010 12:47 am

Xancel hearing the commotion of Sally and Zane's fight ran deeper into the castle with Pheonix not far behind and found Zane talking to a door, "Lady trouble?" he guessed. 'We'll continue later' He thought to Rexson as he broke into his sprint earlier.

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Post  Haar_Dragon on Wed Dec 15, 2010 12:53 am

<Where is everyone now anyway? Dispatch is on DI, Aaron is at RG, and Joe is asleep in his room>

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Post  Maverick Entity on Wed Dec 15, 2010 1:03 am

<How about another Heartless invasion, lol? We need to get the tourney finished. Whats up, danken sie. I want to do Roland Krauss soon, but I can't quite figure out what I will do with him, seeing as how he trained Gunamnex and is basically an even more refined/badass version of him, lol.>

"At the local Ice Cream shop"

Gunamnex: "Seated at an outdoor table, ice cream in hand" This shop's new flavor of sea salt ice cream is remarkable in taste. "Takes a bite"

Oxthmas: "Seated across from Gunamnex" I still prefer the original, but it's not too bad. What is it called again?

Gunamnex: I believe they called it Endless Gummis

Oxthmas: Odd name choice, but it fits the color of it. So, what's on the agenda?

Gunamnex: "Finishes off his ice cream, wiping his face with a handkerchief" I sensed some heartless influx near Disney Castle, but I'm sure the king will deal with it easily.

Oxthmas: Have you ever met King Mickey?

Gunamnex: Yes, but only during his training with Yensid, just before those "three" came into fate's path. He has a very strong essence of light within him, yet I sense that he has still much to learn.

Oxthmas: Should we retire for the evening then?

Gunamnex: You go on ahead, I've got some things to ponder.

Oxthmas: Fine, just don't go off and do something involving that girl without me, you're as clueless as Goofy when it comes to talking to her.

Gunamnex: I promise, now go.

Oxthmas: Okay, "walks back away from the table" see ya! "Flips out through a cloud of coins"

Gunamnex: "Rubs his brow" What am I going to do Roland?... Sora is not who he is in this universe, and Aqua and her friends, along with all the world fragments, still need a redeemer... Yuki... "Sits back in his chair and looks out towards the sun"
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Post  Haar_Dragon on Wed Dec 15, 2010 1:09 am

Dispatch had no idea he was in the <real KHverse> with no way out to realize, and soon met Sora <post *spoilahs!* mickey letter in BBS secret ending> Hey you, is that a Keyblade?

Sora wasn't sure how this stranger knew of the Keyblade, but he didn't like it. "Where'd you find out about the Keyblade?"

Dispatch said, "I should, I work with a ton of weilders..."

Sora yelled, "As if! There are only 7 Keyblade wielders left in the world!"

Dispatch replied, "Seven my ass, there's 8 chosen ones besides a few others!"

Now Sora was very confused.

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Post  Whats_Up4444 on Wed Dec 15, 2010 2:42 am

"The fruit of a unbreakable friendship? Yes. I remember. But it seems you broke it when you wished to never see me....We were never together. You were just stuck in a fantasy" He said as he placed an iPod with earphones plugged in. "Here. Make sure you listen. I believe this song matches this moment. Especally the first verse....Goodbye". <Bleed It Out by Linkin Park.. Not the intro btw> He said as he walked out ignoring everyone he bumped into until he reached The two outside. "Let's go. I'm sick of this". He said with a dark corridor as they all left.

XxxX

"Where are we?" Xiyum asked.

"The World That Never Was...."
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