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<I didn't want TOO much screentime for Nexas. I wanted that, "Oh, s***! He's here!" like with Hollow Ichigo.
Mandy was the mother's name.
Mary/Marian was the daughter's name.
Nexas took care of them after their father died.
This of course wasn't revealed until after the fight.
But was done no longer then a month or so later, in real life time.
It was shown by little tidbits. Like, Nexas always being encountered in Twilight Town, and on one time, he bought them ice dream (which was done really every time he visited, but shown once or twice) He even gave the family Munny.
He also caused the torment of multiple being, including 3 Scythe wielding Nobodies he turned into Reaplings. >_>>
Trexksyl look at Daniel. "Wanna talk about it?"
Mandy was the mother's name.
Mary/Marian was the daughter's name.
Nexas took care of them after their father died.
This of course wasn't revealed until after the fight.
But was done no longer then a month or so later, in real life time.
It was shown by little tidbits. Like, Nexas always being encountered in Twilight Town, and on one time, he bought them ice dream (which was done really every time he visited, but shown once or twice) He even gave the family Munny.
He also caused the torment of multiple being, including 3 Scythe wielding Nobodies he turned into Reaplings. >_>>
Trexksyl look at Daniel. "Wanna talk about it?"
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Yuki thought over.
"Counter with all my strength....?" Yuki said outloud to herself, repeating the man. All Yuki did then was watch him as he prepared his next strike, the chains of his Keyblade wrapping around his arm.
Ack!
She stood up and held it like her opponent, tucked inti her chest, blade resting on her left elbow, this was more of a reverse-mirror stance of his, she ran in a sprint with him, she took her Keyblade and pieced the chains around his left arm like an arrow.
"Counter with all my strength....?" Yuki said outloud to herself, repeating the man. All Yuki did then was watch him as he prepared his next strike, the chains of his Keyblade wrapping around his arm.
Ack!
She stood up and held it like her opponent, tucked inti her chest, blade resting on her left elbow, this was more of a reverse-mirror stance of his, she ran in a sprint with him, she took her Keyblade and pieced the chains around his left arm like an arrow.
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Castle Asylum
<Hey, remember when this was the placeholder name? Remember Castle Oblitoration? And Castle Restoration? Lol @ noobs>
A light came over Dispatch in his sleep in the Janitor's Closet (That Never Was?), opening the door was White in his new clothes. "Dispatch? Are you okay?"
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"Boss! Are you okay?" Zane asked again. "You need anything? Is there anything new I should know?"
Radiant Garden
A young brown-haired, brown eyed girl, wearing a schoolgirl uniform, was sitting on the fountain in the night sky of Radiant Garden. She tossed a Munny pouch and caught it repeating the process over and over.
Upon the pouch was marked. Propertey of Daniel
This was the girl Daniel was talking to.
She smiled, and sighed, losing her smile. "I can't spend a single Munny from him".
She leaned back, her hands on the fountain as she sat-leaned.
She dmiled. "Tomorrow's gonna be fun".
<No, haar/Draco. Don't.>
<Hey, remember when this was the placeholder name? Remember Castle Oblitoration? And Castle Restoration? Lol @ noobs>
A light came over Dispatch in his sleep in the Janitor's Closet (That Never Was?), opening the door was White in his new clothes. "Dispatch? Are you okay?"
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"Boss! Are you okay?" Zane asked again. "You need anything? Is there anything new I should know?"
Radiant Garden
A young brown-haired, brown eyed girl, wearing a schoolgirl uniform, was sitting on the fountain in the night sky of Radiant Garden. She tossed a Munny pouch and caught it repeating the process over and over.
Upon the pouch was marked. Propertey of Daniel
This was the girl Daniel was talking to.
She smiled, and sighed, losing her smile. "I can't spend a single Munny from him".
She leaned back, her hands on the fountain as she sat-leaned.
She dmiled. "Tomorrow's gonna be fun".
<No, haar/Draco. Don't.>
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Xeromus shook his head at Zane. "No. Oh, wait. Did you already hear about the boy, Hartz?"
<By the way... Either Hartz is only about ten years old, or either Terra or Xehanort had been going around having kids before BBS. From the way you described him, Haar, he sounded like a seventeen-year-old.>
<By the way... Either Hartz is only about ten years old, or either Terra or Xehanort had been going around having kids before BBS. From the way you described him, Haar, he sounded like a seventeen-year-old.>
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"Boy hearts?" Zane repeated. Well, sort of. "What's so important about boy's hearts?"
<Edited last post.
He should be 12. Xehanort was an apprentice, had a kid, year-later lost his heart, then 11 years later we're here. Can't be 10 because then we'd be in KH1 time. And I'm sure we just finished Coded. We might do Dream Drop Distance. (Hope not. Spoilers)>
<Edited last post.
He should be 12. Xehanort was an apprentice, had a kid, year-later lost his heart, then 11 years later we're here. Can't be 10 because then we'd be in KH1 time. And I'm sure we just finished Coded. We might do Dream Drop Distance. (Hope not. Spoilers)>
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Xeromus groaned. "Zane, kindly stop screwing around. A young man by the name 'Hartz' recently attacked Nathan, just outside the castle. Several other members, including Lance and I, showed up as Hartz was overpowered. As it happens, Hartz is the son of Xemnas. I have no idea how that is possible, nor do I want to find out. X-Sigma, a complete bastard who was only forced into submission by Rexial, Aleri, and Siks' cooperation, showed up and sprung Hartz, and expressed an intention of training the child."
He held up two cards, one being a picture of X-Sigma, the other being Hartz. "The musclehead is X-Sigma. He is not to be underestimated. He downed Rexial with a single blow. ...Oh, wait, half of the people we know have enough strength for that. Point is, he's evil, and now Xemnas's brat is getting stronger. I thought that I would at last warn you of the situation."
He held up two cards, one being a picture of X-Sigma, the other being Hartz. "The musclehead is X-Sigma. He is not to be underestimated. He downed Rexial with a single blow. ...Oh, wait, half of the people we know have enough strength for that. Point is, he's evil, and now Xemnas's brat is getting stronger. I thought that I would at last warn you of the situation."
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"Oh". Zane listen as his leader went on. "X-Sigma?" Zane leaned on the picture. "That's the dude I sent home packing with a single Thunder Shot and a threat. Haha". He chuckled. His smile stopped. "So, Xemnas has a son? Do you think this was when Ansem was still around, or when he bacame a Nobody did he became a father?"
<Zane never did see Xemnas. He'd also assume it was the Nobody of Ansem the Wise, as he was a resident of Radiant Garden, and that's what all were to believed.>
<Zane never did see Xemnas. He'd also assume it was the Nobody of Ansem the Wise, as he was a resident of Radiant Garden, and that's what all were to believed.>
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"Zexion? Maya... she used to train under..." She clutched her head as her appearance became that of the Cloaked Schemer as she dropped to her knees, "Ow... Maya doesn't know... Feels funny..." The stress of the returning memory caused Maya to black out as she slumped forward onto the carpet reverting to her normal appearance.
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<Plot.
Twist.>
Twist.>
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<and now, my greatest achievement! >
<Music begins to play:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g_yZyIgp2IQ&feature=player_embedded#!>
Gunamnex suddenly stopped in place, his keyblade dropping from his hand. Its chain rescinded to its original form, the portion around his arm clinking as it brushed past Yuki's keyblade. From the point of her keyblade's tip, one could see where she had struck. In the exact center of the tattoo of Gunamnex's left arm, within the interloping band of the infinity symbol, her blade was driven in. The young maiden gasped at the sight, blood trickling down from the wound. She pulled her keyblade back, still staring at the wound. It was crescent moon shaped, and although the points where blood had trickled from quickly healed, the crescent moon remain, dark purple in color, a scar upon let another scar it seemed. Yuki held her keyblade by her side, walking backwards a few steps, a blur of thoughts in her head. She looked now into Gunamnex's eyes.
His eyes were still the pure sky blue they had always been. He had a smile on his face, as though the attack had incurred no painful response. Picking up his own keyblade from the ice, he walked towards her, and before she could realize it, he was embracing her.
"You have done well Kuroyuki" he whispered into her ear.
She was taken aback, the man that had just now ferociously fought her was now embracing her. His skin was cool to the touch, but she could feel some form of heat, most likely the energy that flowed within him. He smelled like the air of a windy plain, a comforting scent.
Gunamnex, releasing her from his embrace, held her still at less than arms length.
"The true reason I have watched over you, why I have sought to ensure your success, is not just because you are destined to command Kingdom Hearts." He said as he gazed into her eyes. He brushed a stroke of her hair that had shifted from place for a moment.
"I love you" he said softly, putting his lips to hers. As Gunamnex did so, he encountered a sweet response, like that of ice cream.
<Music begins to play:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g_yZyIgp2IQ&feature=player_embedded#!>
Gunamnex suddenly stopped in place, his keyblade dropping from his hand. Its chain rescinded to its original form, the portion around his arm clinking as it brushed past Yuki's keyblade. From the point of her keyblade's tip, one could see where she had struck. In the exact center of the tattoo of Gunamnex's left arm, within the interloping band of the infinity symbol, her blade was driven in. The young maiden gasped at the sight, blood trickling down from the wound. She pulled her keyblade back, still staring at the wound. It was crescent moon shaped, and although the points where blood had trickled from quickly healed, the crescent moon remain, dark purple in color, a scar upon let another scar it seemed. Yuki held her keyblade by her side, walking backwards a few steps, a blur of thoughts in her head. She looked now into Gunamnex's eyes.
His eyes were still the pure sky blue they had always been. He had a smile on his face, as though the attack had incurred no painful response. Picking up his own keyblade from the ice, he walked towards her, and before she could realize it, he was embracing her.
"You have done well Kuroyuki" he whispered into her ear.
She was taken aback, the man that had just now ferociously fought her was now embracing her. His skin was cool to the touch, but she could feel some form of heat, most likely the energy that flowed within him. He smelled like the air of a windy plain, a comforting scent.
Gunamnex, releasing her from his embrace, held her still at less than arms length.
"The true reason I have watched over you, why I have sought to ensure your success, is not just because you are destined to command Kingdom Hearts." He said as he gazed into her eyes. He brushed a stroke of her hair that had shifted from place for a moment.
"I love you" he said softly, putting his lips to hers. As Gunamnex did so, he encountered a sweet response, like that of ice cream.
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Aleri's eyes widened in shock. "Miss Maya?! Maya!" He kneeled next to her and tried shaking her. "Are you alright?!"
Ugh, and I can't ignore that... She trained under Zexion!? I mean, not that it makes her evil, but... Just saying his name did this to her! Are her memories fragmented!?
Seeing that it wasn't working, Aleri picked Maya up and ran in the direction of the caslte. He fervently hoped Lance knew what to do.
Ugh, and I can't ignore that... She trained under Zexion!? I mean, not that it makes her evil, but... Just saying his name did this to her! Are her memories fragmented!?
Seeing that it wasn't working, Aleri picked Maya up and ran in the direction of the caslte. He fervently hoped Lance knew what to do.
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<@ Maverick: >
Lance saw Aleri running towards the castle grounds with an unconsicious Maya in his arms, "Al!" His voice was filled with concern as he rushed to meet him, taking Maya from him, "What happened?"
Lance saw Aleri running towards the castle grounds with an unconsicious Maya in his arms, "Al!" His voice was filled with concern as he rushed to meet him, taking Maya from him, "What happened?"
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Aleri couldn't get his point across beteen his panting and his stammering. "I-I... we... t-talked... she... Zexion... sh-she fell... don't know...!"
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Lance nodded, "Calm down, Al. Deep breaths, let's get Maya to the infirmary. Then, you can explain." He told him in a controlled tone.
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Aleri almost collapsed himself. However, he managed to will himself to carry her for awhile longer. "...Why does everything I do seem to go up in smoke? I had a conversation, and it left this girl like this... She looks like she's in pain. Lance, I can't find my way around, so you'll have to take her yourself." He motioned for him to take Maya.
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<I wasn't going to. At most I was going to say something about the minor character control with the name on the pouch, but who gives a crap?>
Dispatch jumped. "Whowhatwhen?!" He shook his head. "I WAS fine until you interrupted my sleep..."
<TCTNW>
Daniel shook his head. "No. No I don't."
Dispatch jumped. "Whowhatwhen?!" He shook his head. "I WAS fine until you interrupted my sleep..."
<TCTNW>
Daniel shook his head. "No. No I don't."
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Lance saw Aleri running towards the castle grounds with an unconsicious Maya in his arms, "Al!" His voice was filled with concern as he rushed to meet him, taking Maya from him, "What happened?"
"It's not your fault, Al." Lance explained as he carried the girl, Thalia ran up beside him.
"Did she lapse again?" Thalia asked looking slightly concerned.
Lance nodded, "Yeah, I don't know what triggered it this time though. Last time, she just did it to herself with that wierd costume... Al?" He looked to the young man with a glimmer of hope, thinking he may know what triggered Maya's collapse.
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Aleri looked away for a second. "I... mentioned how Zexion decieved Siks into committing murder."
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Thalia nodded, "It's probably the mention of Zexion... She did say something about a maid that took care of her. Maybe she was sleighted to be an apprentice before that whole deal went to hell? She'd only have been around two or three at the time but... she could have known Zexion or his somebody somehow." She deduced.
Lance nodded, "Course you could be looking into it too far. Maybe it was the mention of murder that caused the lapse..." He pondered as they arrived at the infirmary and set Maya down on one of the cots as a medic tended to her.
Lance nodded, "Course you could be looking into it too far. Maybe it was the mention of murder that caused the lapse..." He pondered as they arrived at the infirmary and set Maya down on one of the cots as a medic tended to her.
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Aleri sat down, the feeling of depression setting in. "Don't you know about her past? ...Wait, I have an idea." He stood up, his determination returning. "I can try to MindLink with her, and see her thoughts. Maybe I'll get an idea of what's going on..."
<To be honest, I was hoping for Al to look into her mind at some point.>
<To be honest, I was hoping for Al to look into her mind at some point.>
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Lance tried to stifle a laugh, "You can try. But, I'm telling you right now... It's a horrible idea. Maya's mind is a little...."
"Warped." Thalia finished for him.
"Warped." Thalia finished for him.
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Aleri pointed at the center of his chest. "...I'm not much different."
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<Epicness thy name is Maverick.>
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Lance shook his head, "You can try it... but I don't think you'll comprehend what you'll see..."
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